Book Review: White Horse, by Alex Adams

Alex Adams’ White Horse came galloping out of the herd of dystopian fiction earlier this year, accompanied by lots of positive reviews and buzz. I took a bet on it, but unfortunately, for me, what I had taken for a White Horse was, in actuality, a bob-tailed nag.

(Okay, okay…no more horse puns.)

wh

While it initially seemed like a promising example of a post-apocalypse novel, I ended up finishing White Horse solely for the reveals. Even when reading something that I don’t entirely enjoy for various reasons, if there are unanswered questions and the twists come fast and furious, I’ll still read it. This was the case with White Horse, where though I could tell within the first 75 or so pages that this wasn’t going to be a favorite of mine, there were tons of twists.

However, most of the novel’s twists were nonsensical and/or utterly, utterly weird. The explanations given for the apocalypse seem as though Adams liked too many ideas and tried to jam them all in at the same time, rather than simply letting one reasonable explanation stand alone. The novel’s villains have no discernible similarities to actual human beings; their motivations are as sketchy as the bad guys from the Rocky & Bullwinkle cartoons, right down to the dramatic evil villain monologues. In the interests of spoilers, that’s all I’ll say about that, but you will definitely know which twists I mean when you hit them. While I’m talking about the characters…frankly, even our heroes feel unrealistic. Zoe’s companion Lisa is naive to the point of actual stupidity; Nick the therapist should have been reported for unprofessional conduct; protagonist Zoe herself seems to have more lives than a cat, stretching my credulity to the breaking point.

The “then” and “now” narrative construction of the novel was definitely interesting, and it kept the story feeling fresh. There were some nice parallels between Zoe’s challenges pre- and post-end of the world, specifically her relationship to those around her, both friend and foe. It also gave the story a vignette-like feel, and (ostensibly) allowed Adams to skip around to the most gripping parts of the story. Despite the unique story framework, though, there was a heck of a lot of walking. My takeaway? Make sure you wear comfortable shoes for the apocalypse.

Perhaps the most buzz has centered on Adams’ writing style. And I’m not completely opposed to it: Some individual sentences in White Horse were quite lovely. Zoe’s dilemma with the jar, which opens the novel and remains one of its central mysteries, is interestingly done, and makes great use of the unreliable narrator trope. And the very last sentence in the novel, for example, is great–the imagery is evocative and the emotion feels real, and I felt some affection for Zoe in that moment.

Unfortunately, these gems are few and far between. Most of the potential action and advancement of the plot was instead choked to death by the author’s complete overuse of similes and metaphors. They were clunky, misapplied, distracting, and INESCAPABLE. I began bookmarking the more egregious ones as I read (which is never a good sign.) Some choice examples:

  • “My heart is an elevator with broken cables crashing through the floors all the way to my feet.” (56)
  • “She’s a desperate kaleidoscope searching for a pattern that both asks her questions and answers them with words that will yield comfort.” (103)
  • “My infrastructure collapses in on itself and I have no choice but to crouch down, one hand reaching out in front to steady me like I’m an unwieldy tripod.” (115)
  • “My eyes are rapid-filling cisterns.” (170)
  • “He’s a sidewalk in summer.” (170)
  • “We giggle like silly girls, carefree and alive, until reality begins to lap around the edges like a thirsty cat.” (246)

A good editor would have pruned these sentences in order to make them manageable. Because real people DON’T think or speak like this! And I feel pretty confident in saying that real people definitely wouldn’t think or speak like this in the middle of a full-blown mutant pandemic. As it stood, however, I was constantly jolted out of the action by our narrator’s inane and bizarre descriptive language.

Try not to roll your eyes when you hit the book’s end only to be confronted by an excerpt for the sequel, Red Horse (second in the trilogy).  With its overly-flowery descriptions, nonsensical plot, and unrealistic characters, I don’t think I will be returning to the world of White Horse any time soon. For truly transformative dystopian fiction, read Cormac McCarthy’s The Road instead.

I received White Horse free for review from publisher Atria through Netgalley. White Horse was published April 17, 2012.

Bookwanderer Rating: Two out of five stars
Bookwanderer Tagline: “My eyes are rapid-filling cisterns.” (Sorry, I had to!)

Other Reviews: The Book Smugglers, Devourer of Books, Book Chick City

Advertisements

4 Responses to “Book Review: White Horse, by Alex Adams”


  1. 1 Heather January 20, 2013 at 9:32 am

    I’m 100 pages into this one right now and while I don’t disagree with you so far (especially about the simile/metaphor situation), I am finding the book to be a gripping read. I’m planning to finish it today so I’m looking forward to these “twists” you speak of. 🙂

    • 2 tarynwanderer January 20, 2013 at 12:20 pm

      Hi Heather! I won’t lie, I read this book in a day or so myself! It certainly was gripping, though I couldn’t help but become more and more bogged down by the endless metaphors and similes. I think if those has been cut, I would have had no problem giving this book three or even four stars! I’m glad you’re enjoying it, and interested to hear what you think of the coming twists.

  2. 3 Sophie August 9, 2014 at 5:34 pm

    It’s a really good book and don’t judge it until you are all the way through. Sure it is a weird book and it has many plot twists but it is different and interesting. I can’t put it down. And the fact that it has lots of description shows what an imagination the author has. Name me one book that doesn’t have a sentence in it that people don’t say or think in real life. Please read it is different and mysterious 😀


  1. 1 Top Ten Tuesday: Top Ten Most Frustrating Characters Ever « bookwanderer Trackback on January 29, 2013 at 7:58 am

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s




Enter your email address to subscribe to this blog and receive notifications of new posts by email.

Join 124 other followers

Categories

My Goodreads

Blog Archive


%d bloggers like this: